SGCSG1, on 11 April 2012 - 04:49 PM, said:
The writing style for this article.... it really doesn't work. Lots of noise. Not much signal.
It's nice to see someone trying something different. It may not be 100% successful, but how many writers do you know who are going beyond "This is the game, this is how it plays."? I can think of a handful, in an industry where there are thousands
of people writing about games.
For my next article, ladies and gentlemen, I'm going to use IGN's writing style, where everything is kept simple and is wrong at every possible opportunity, e.g. "Mass Effect 3 is an isometric puzzle game where you control Leon S. Kennedy, a one-man-band, as he goes to Spain in an attempt to stop the President's daughter from launching her entire nuclear arsenal using her army of highly skilled stunt drivers and time-travelling samurai."
Needless to say, 3/10.