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4th November 2002, 10:54pm
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![]() The Guv'nor ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Site Staff Posts: 1,871 Joined: 2-September 02 From: England of course! West Sussex Member No.: 1,168 |
Firstly to point out what of the fic has already happened there have been four chapters and we are now on the fifth. 25 posts is roughly a chapter and it'd be good to keep to that if possible. Another thing to ask is that when posting it'd be good if people could continue to write Instalment by whoever... It just helps when I come to download it... And remember if I hadn't of downloaded it where would we be right now?
But forget about that! So far the fic has introduced us to the characters by plunging us in right at the deep end of a raid on the Sirius temple. This was a catastrophic failure and cost many lives. (Read posts 1-25) Then there was the whole Carlos' 18th birthday thing and the Jane relationship... The personnel are introduced a little further and we see a little bit of training, the occasional bit of work and a lot of socialising. There's also an interesting incident with an alien in the base here but you'll have to read the fic to see it. Here we see a massive revelation on Carlos' part which is still running as a nice storyline at the moment. (Read posts 26-50) Chapter three portrays an extremely detailed UFO raid and is a definite must read. (Read posts 51-76) Then in chapter four we come across the casualties from the raid and Trigger begins his own saga. The base Commander also goes a little crazy about now... Not in an insane sense of the word, just read it and you'll see. The result is a rather nasty bust up downtown and we discover exactly what the government of mega primus has planned for the future of XCom which, all in all, does not look like it's anything good... Our android has interestingly just made a training simulator for our soldiers but it's yet to be used. Meanwhile Ki-tat is looking for love... Hopefully he'll be a little more wary than his baby brother was hey CAP? (Read posts 77-98) Now onto the current chapter, number five we see nothing much happening. Except of course the pilgrimage for a new way of seeing and an alien raid on the most significant building in the city... But all of this is yet to unfold. (Read posts 99 onwards) Anything in the fic now or later that someone doesn't understand should be discussed in here. Don't be shy! Speak out! -------------------- Welcome back to the wonderful world of Fan-fiction! (it's short for fantastic!)
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5th March 2003, 11:25am
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![]() Lieutenant ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 776 Joined: 2-September 02 From: Melbourne, Victoria, Australia. Member No.: 626 |
ok, theres an attack on alpha by CoS, the ex-cops are attacking the CoS building, the foot soldiors are standing around smoking weed (nah, jus kiddn'). what about the alpha units? they all dies? c'mon, spek to meh!
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The Veteran Apoc Fanfic discussion 4th November 2002, 10:54pm
Tammy Okay, I've talked to Zager about this and I th... 5th January 2003, 6:18am
The Veteran I've been after you for days Tammy! Me and... 5th January 2003, 3:08pm
Zager Sure, I'll be on then, I hope. 5th January 2003, 3:44pm
The Veteran I've just posted in the UFO fic Zager, I'l... 5th January 2003, 3:48pm
Mouse Nightshirt Come on people! Post! Chop chop!
Or w... 13th January 2003, 5:01pm
Zager I'm waiting for Tammy to post. 13th January 2003, 7:19pm
Tammy No pressure there. Okay, I'm working on it... 13th January 2003, 7:29pm
Ki-tat Chung wheres carlos? i need to talk to him about this... 14th January 2003, 6:30am
Mouse Nightshirt .........neeeeeed.................fiiiiicccc......... 20th February 2003, 7:35pm
The Veteran Yes we do Mouse!
Come on everybody what are yo... 20th February 2003, 11:13pm
The Veteran Zager's hit on the Temple of the Millenium wil... 5th March 2003, 4:41pm
Zager After discussions, the current plan is that most o... 5th March 2003, 8:58pm
The Veteran Indeed, we also discussed the existence of XCom su... 5th March 2003, 9:47pm
Zager So, when is somebody going to post? 5th March 2003, 9:50pm
Snikers Can my char be in Alpha Base? Or would a tale of e... 6th March 2003, 12:31pm
The Veteran Not at all. I think it would be a really good way ... 6th March 2003, 6:34pm
The Veteran That's a bit of a mammoth post but hey, noone ... 13th March 2003, 11:32pm
Snikers Is anyone else going to write something? 3rd April 2003, 12:52pm
Zager I've got nothing to post, I'm waiting for ... 3rd April 2003, 2:26pm
Tammy Well, I don't have anything really to contribu... 3rd April 2003, 2:53pm
Snikers I sure can't post because I posted immediately... 4th April 2003, 1:13pm
The Veteran Argh! Come on somebody! I don't want t... 4th April 2003, 7:18pm
Ender Mckay hello all, im looking for a formated (with spaces ... 16th April 2003, 5:18am
Snikers **poke**
Me pokee fanfic to see if it moveses. 8th May 2003, 11:49pm
The Veteran Two months... :hmmm: 19th May 2003, 9:59pm
bevan Never fear..... Bevan is here *enter Bevan with hi... 23rd May 2003, 12:56pm
The Veteran Nice one Bevan, not too shabby at all
Just go b... 24th May 2003, 3:44pm
bevan ok, *note to self, write in past tense* ill just ... 25th May 2003, 5:57am
The Veteran You got it Bev, that rewrite was so perfect I stop... 25th May 2003, 4:33pm
bevan yeah he was just a little bit annoyed, i tryed to ... 26th May 2003, 11:36am
The Veteran lol, it's understandable! He's being c... 26th May 2003, 11:58am
bevan it is collapsing you can understand how someone w... 26th May 2003, 12:04pm
Snikers Snikers is more or less done for this chapter. As ... 15th June 2003, 10:14pm
The Veteran Base is destroyed, cult is pretty much annihilated... 15th June 2003, 11:42pm
Tammy Guess it's time for me to come up with somethi... 16th June 2003, 2:51am
bevan If XCOM does get the brown end of the boot im sure... 16th June 2003, 12:03pm
Snikers But what does XCOM have to offer Psycke? 19th June 2003, 1:27am
Zager A guided missile straight into their headquarters ... 19th June 2003, 3:47am
The Veteran XCom won't go completely under... But it will ... 19th June 2003, 9:59pm
Zager X-COM is a corporation now, not a governmental org... 21st June 2003, 2:24pm
The Veteran Well over 50% of XCom's funding comes from the... 21st June 2003, 10:03pm
The Veteran Thankyou oh beautiful wonderful intelligent Tammy... 16th July 2003, 9:25pm
Tammy Yep, had to get Pete back in there. Go take a p... 16th July 2003, 10:58pm
Niml heya im kinda new to this forum but i am kinda int... 11th August 2003, 3:00am
The Veteran Hey niml, go read the fanfiction rules topic in, d... 11th August 2003, 10:45am
sgtsurge Howdy, I like to read the fanfic that y'all ha... 11th August 2003, 4:29pm
Fox Vet said one time he was working on a compilation ... 11th August 2003, 7:54pm
The Veteran I have a 100% up to date version of the Apoc fanfi... 11th August 2003, 10:25pm
Niml hmm okay cool ill post my character's semi rou... 12th August 2003, 2:56am
The Veteran Go for it Niml that sounds fine. And yes you can s... 12th August 2003, 10:39am
Niml Hmm there is my first stab at fan fiction all nice... 12th August 2003, 4:12pm
The Veteran Very impressive niml. I think you're a natural... 12th August 2003, 10:06pm
Niml Thanks compliments feel good. so when does the n... 15th August 2003, 12:33am
The Veteran sometimes minutes sometimes months It's a sor... 15th August 2003, 9:53am
Niml Hmmm... yeah because i really want to post again b... 15th August 2003, 4:58pm
The Veteran It's a rule enforced by hideous mutilation... ... 15th August 2003, 9:50pm
Niml yay! oh well all i have to do is type up somet... 15th August 2003, 10:18pm
The Veteran It's needed right now... I think everyone... 16th August 2003, 8:31am
Niml so are you writing next? then i write? and see if ... 16th August 2003, 9:16am
The Veteran Yay! I have the 100th reply in this topic
I ... 16th August 2003, 11:13am
bevan Sorry people... my creative juices (the little i h... 16th August 2003, 12:52pm
Snikers I don't have the slightest idea what I can wri... 16th August 2003, 1:52pm
The Veteran Well read the fic... The whole point is that what ... 16th August 2003, 2:54pm
Niml Hmm common this could be cool do whatever feel fre... 17th August 2003, 6:34am
bevan some one can come greet my character if they want ... 25th October 2003, 1:24pm
The Veteran You'll have to give us more info first Bev... ... 25th October 2003, 2:46pm
bevan Well Bevan is a MegaPol cop (corrupt coz he works ... 26th October 2003, 10:55am
The Veteran I'm confuesd 26th October 2003, 9:13pm
bevan its ok, you arent the only one :rolleyes:
if you... 27th October 2003, 10:23am
Niml one question.... does anyone know where this will ... 7th December 2003, 11:03am
The Veteran Both! The CoS storyline is coming to an end. T... 7th December 2003, 11:37am
bevan X-Com would be pretty well weakened too after losi... 8th December 2003, 11:43am
Zager QUOTE(bevan @ Dec 8 2003, 06:43 AM)X-Com woul... 9th December 2003, 1:48am
The Veteran Yes we need aliens now! Come on let's have... 9th December 2003, 10:55pm
bevan aliens attack where? 10th December 2003, 11:06am
The Veteran Am I meant to be writing this fic myself?!?... 10th December 2003, 12:25pm
bevan i cant write in it i put the last post in 17th December 2003, 9:19am
The Veteran I noticed that after I put the post Looks like Za... 17th December 2003, 9:21pm
The Veteran Ok so it's bloody massive but someone has to b... 19th December 2003, 4:24am
Ki-tat Chung the red humanoid is pat/jon. i'm not sure whet... 2nd January 2004, 9:58am
Zager QUOTEBy now the second squad of soldiers had rushe... 30th January 2004, 3:43pm
Ki-tat Chung maybe the rookies just wanted to feel good so they... 17th February 2004, 11:14am
bevan Fic has died a bit fellas, i will most likely make... 29th March 2004, 10:52am
Snikers But the battle is still going right? 10th April 2004, 12:10am
bevan Yeah looks that way, might show up, cap me a few a... 10th April 2004, 10:54am
The Veteran Well it looks pretty much tidied up already to me.... 1st May 2004, 7:33pm
The Veteran Was going to write in the fic but can't. Sorte... 3rd June 2004, 4:05pm
Ki-tat Chung roflol
everyones friends except for the aliens tha... 14th June 2004, 3:08am
The Veteran Yet still noone is posting? 11th August 2004, 8:55am
bevan Seems that way, maybe we should pull somthing toge... 13th August 2004, 12:11pm
Ki-tat Chung :: sees infestation of tumble weeds roll by ::
lor... 21st April 2005, 11:14am
Stun Grenade Heeeeelooooo!!!! Stunnie here.... ... 22nd April 2005, 10:03am
Ki-tat Chung this fic, its just about dead. as for UFO however,... 22nd April 2005, 12:03pm
Stun Grenade oh that blows!! 23rd April 2005, 3:49am
The Veteran Ki-tat you're barred! Don't be such a... 29th April 2005, 9:59am
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