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3rd September 2005, 5:31pm
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![]() What Would Gearhead Do? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Fan Fiction Posts: 161 Joined: November 2002 From: Gamma Base Member No.: 1,055 |
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--- All data classified to the highest levels. Unauthorized viewing of this data in a manner that harms the operational security of StrategyCore is considered Treason. --- Checking Credentials. --- Credentials Confirmed. --- Compiling Fanfic works, Author: Skonar 1. X-Com Chronicles : Twilight 2. X-Com Chronicles : Gearhead 3. X-Com Chronicles : Prophet 4. X-Com Chronicles : Siege of New York --- Done. Have a nice day. -------------------- |
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3rd September 2005, 5:35pm
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![]() What Would Gearhead Do? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Fan Fiction Posts: 161 Joined: November 2002 From: Gamma Base Member No.: 1,055 |
I'm just opening this because I love and adore feedback. Any feedback would be totally appreciated.
'Gearhead' is up for replacement in relatively short order once I manage to finish up the current rather more interesting writing project I have for X-Com Fanfic... "Data Canister 927, X-Com Archives. Siege of New York, 2000." I'm also seriously thinking about rewriting Prophet in total and eventually finishing it. Which I'm sure would be nice. Incidentally if anyone wants to engage me in debate on stuff relating to X-Com, that's totally cool. I get a kick out of discussing how big skyrangers should be and why Chryssalids have teeth. -------------------- |
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3rd September 2005, 5:44pm
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![]() Catching the next pimpmobile outta here! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Chief Editor Posts: 1,753 Joined: August 2003 From: UK Member No.: 417 |
If Chryssalids didn't have teeth, what would they do with all those toothbrushes?
I happen to agree with you about the Skyranger. I'd love to zipline down from that baby. |
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3rd September 2005, 5:46pm
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![]() What Would Gearhead Do? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Fan Fiction Posts: 161 Joined: November 2002 From: Gamma Base Member No.: 1,055 |
Teeth nothing, they're MANDIBLES I TELL YOU! MANDIBLLLES!
Ziplining out of a skyranger would take specialist equipment to avoid getting burned to death under the damn things lift. (See an early attempt at such a thing in Twilight!) XD -------------------- |
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3rd September 2005, 6:15pm
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![]() Catching the next pimpmobile outta here! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Chief Editor Posts: 1,753 Joined: August 2003 From: UK Member No.: 417 |
I don't know, you go pretty fast on a line, and most combat overalls these days are fireproof. Ok, the air would be hot, but there could be a nice little zone of coolish air around the arse-end of the 'ranger, with the right design.
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4th September 2005, 12:32am
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![]() The Guv'nor ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Site Staff Posts: 1,810 Joined: September 2002 From: England of course! West Sussex Member No.: 1,168 |
Skonar wasn't it me and you who spent like three days deciding how big the raner was in the first place? Look in the data canisters there's one in there and then we (me and someone!) debated size and it kept getting bigger and then smaller again... I tink we ended up happy
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4th September 2005, 6:27am
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![]() What Would Gearhead Do? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Fan Fiction Posts: 161 Joined: November 2002 From: Gamma Base Member No.: 1,055 |
Indeed it was...
I would say we defeated the alien threat with our incredible size-warp technology!!!! -------------------- |
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4th September 2005, 3:36pm
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![]() Catching the next pimpmobile outta here! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Chief Editor Posts: 1,753 Joined: August 2003 From: UK Member No.: 417 |
I always have fun wondering about the different alien races. I've always imagined the Mutons to come from a high-gravity world, and having extrmeely dense bones and muscles as a result.
Snakemen, being actually cold blooded, and hence being more formidable to fight in the desert than in snowy tundra. Love stuff like that. |
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4th September 2005, 4:08pm
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![]() Administrator ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Admin Posts: 3,052 Joined: May 2002 From: Cheshire, England Member No.: 1 |
Well a few X-COM Alliance fan fics would sort that out wouldn't it?
If you're extremely lucky, I might even dabble ina bit of fic at some point in the future. -------------------- |
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18th September 2005, 3:04am
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![]() Catching the next pimpmobile outta here! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Chief Editor Posts: 1,753 Joined: August 2003 From: UK Member No.: 417 |
I'd also like to know just how do Ethereals survive, when their bodies are so knackered? I mean, yes, ok, all their abilities (incluing normal bodily ones like digestion and perspiration etc) are being enhanced by their psi powers, but still.
I mean, come on, what sort of superior race needs to use their telekinetic abilities when it's time to go to the toilet? |
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18th September 2005, 8:11am
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![]() What Would Gearhead Do? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Fan Fiction Posts: 161 Joined: November 2002 From: Gamma Base Member No.: 1,055 |
In the Diane Duane novel, it was posed that Ethereals have an impossibly metabolism... like, the only thing keeping them alive is their psi.
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18th September 2005, 8:32am
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![]() Catching the next pimpmobile outta here! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Chief Editor Posts: 1,753 Joined: August 2003 From: UK Member No.: 417 |
Well, yes, exactly, that's pretty much what the ufopaedia section in EU implied. That their bodies couldn't survive without constantly being enhanced and reinforced with psi. So, do they sleep or what? Or do they just hook themselves up to something when they need to rest, which performs all of their bodily functions. Which is damn unlikely.
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19th September 2005, 5:38am
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![]() What Would Gearhead Do? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Fan Fiction Posts: 161 Joined: November 2002 From: Gamma Base Member No.: 1,055 |
Your heart never rests till you're dead. Why should Ethereals be any different with Psi?
While you are asleep you're still burning calories, etc. -------------------- |
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19th September 2005, 5:59am
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![]() Catching the next pimpmobile outta here! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Chief Editor Posts: 1,753 Joined: August 2003 From: UK Member No.: 417 |
But how can they be using their psi powers to keep their body going when they're asleep? Are you implying that their psi powers are like the mental equivalent of cardiac muscle? I suppose that'd work.
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19th September 2005, 6:40am
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![]() Administrator ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Admin Posts: 3,052 Joined: May 2002 From: Cheshire, England Member No.: 1 |
It'd certainly make them even more formiddable. But you're making a few assumptions here - hav you seen an Ethereal blink before? So how do you know they even sleep?
(I'm going off the assumption thqat since we're all related to them - as per the end game text where the alien brain put life on our planet - the ones that actually sleep will have eyelids. -------------------- |
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23rd September 2005, 11:40am
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Tentacle Pentacle ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 761 Joined: September 2002 From: XCOMIB Ireland Member No.: 566 |
QUOTE(FullAuto @ 18th September 2005, 4:04am) I mean, come on, what sort of superior race needs to use their telekinetic abilities when it's time to go to the toilet? ... in spaaaceman, that's a bad mental image. glowing blue auras, hovering teleporting...I'll stop. Maybe they just have a lot of mind-controlled nurses from the 'lesser' races to mind petty things like their bodily functions, when they come off shift. They don't telekinetically clean themselves, they mind-control a lackey to clean them. Sort of a queen-ant structure. Which they've become totally dependent on. "mind-controlled nurses" -------------------- The deadly Lobsterman threat was finally countered by melee combat with power tools. -ufopaedia.org
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16th August 2006, 6:49am
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![]() What Would Gearhead Do? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Fan Fiction Posts: 161 Joined: November 2002 From: Gamma Base Member No.: 1,055 |
Herin follows a snippet out of the fic I'm working on currently.
I thought I might as well pimp myself out for some attention, as I am an attention whore. ------------- 14. --- Nova Scotia, X-Com Base 'Nova Scotia': XF-37, X-Com Intelligence Services Control Hub 7, December 23rd 2000, 12:10 EST. Alana Bryant stared at the computer screen for several shocked seconds at the 'disconnected' icon, flashing brightly over an automatically generated transcript. Yes. I need to know the print number of your copy offal kitt. It's a situation Thirty-Twelve, red, New York City. A little numbly she reached up and corrected 'Offal Kitt' to 'of- Oh fuck it.' She saved the transcript, placed it into the automatically designated folder, and pulled up the codebook file, hoping she was wrong. Section thirty - Encounters of the Third kind, confirmedly hostile in nature, belonging to races under groupings A through E. That was inclusive of everything from sectoids to silacoids. She ran her cursor down the list, untill she found the twelvth entry. She pinched the bridge of her nose. Type Twelve - Species Group D-2 Nonsentient Parasitic Terror Weapon / Chryssalid The colour code attached to the entry was similarly understated. Code Red - Active Infection in open environment. Alana took a long breath before closing the codebook file. She took the time to print out the transcript with an appended codebook translation and give it to the watch supervisor. She then left the watch room, ignoring the protestations of her watch supervisor, went to her bunk and pulled out the photograph of her two children, aged Four and Nine years old respectively, and took the time to kiss each of their faces, both shining at the eldest's birthday party last june, back in Queens. She then unholstered her service automatic, pulled back the slide to chamber a round, and shot herself through the right temple. Her body, while found almost immediately, was not put into the morgue untill twelve hours later, long after the emergency klaxons had stopped ringing. -------------------- |
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21st March 2007, 7:02pm
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![]() What Would Gearhead Do? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Fan Fiction Posts: 161 Joined: November 2002 From: Gamma Base Member No.: 1,055 |
*Sniffle.* I whore myself out for attention and this is the response I get?!
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21st March 2007, 7:26pm
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![]() Catching the next pimpmobile outta here! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Chief Editor Posts: 1,753 Joined: August 2003 From: UK Member No.: 417 |
You love it, you whore.
Addendum: We get a fair few readers, but only a few commentators, so don't be downhearted! |
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21st March 2007, 7:53pm
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![]() What Would Gearhead Do? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Fan Fiction Posts: 161 Joined: November 2002 From: Gamma Base Member No.: 1,055 |
Well, yes, I do.
And I shouldn't be! But I'm 30 000 words into Siege and I've only made it to half past three on day one. Slightly overwhelming, given that there's still another twelve to go. -------------------- |
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