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> Working on a new fanfic, Would like some feedback on my idea
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post 9th January 2005, 8:33pm
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When you start leaning about the Reticulans in a game, one of the glossary articles states that the Reticulans have been a spacefaring civilisation for thousands of years. The galaxy is known to be over ten billion years old, so that would mak the Reticulans one of the youngest spacefaring races in the galaxy. This has given me an idea for a new fanfic.

It will be set around 2030. Humanity rejected the Reticulan offer and went on to defeat the Reticulans. The world has began to recover but it still faces enormous problems, including the fact that the military doesn't have the resources to completely wipe out the transgenants and the Biomass. The Old Greys have arrived and they have rebuilt the Qport, opening the galaxy up to humanity. They are doing what they can to help, but they are pessimistic about repairing the environmental damage caused by the Fall.

The main character will be a police officer who discovers a dead body with the same DNA as the World President who is apparently still alive and well. He has to find out who cloned the President and why. Is it a group of humans using alien technology to take over the government, surviving rebel Reticulans, the Old Greys, or a new alien race with imperialistic ambitions? During his investigation, which will take him to a different solar system, he will learn a great deal about the relationship between the Reticulan factions and the Reticulans and their more advanced neighbours. This will be very much a murder mystery type of story with very little combat, but it will explore how human society has evolved in the years after the failed invasion.

What I'm concerned about is that it is going to be inconsistent with the official Altar storyline which has humanity accept the offer, or my previous Interregum story. On the other hand, when Aftershock is released, the plotline is unlikely to have many similarities to Interregum either. Do you guys think I should go ahead with this story? If I do, it will probably be ready to be posted around the beginning of March.
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post 9th January 2005, 8:57pm
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Troll I think I speak for everyone when I say your FanFic are always of the best possible quality and content. I for one would be pleased to read anything you wish to pen or type! Bring it on!

Ps.....Is it ready yet?! tongue.gif


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post 9th January 2005, 9:20pm
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My word, if you're this excited about some fan fiction, what are you going to be like in the weeks before Aftershock goes on sale? We're probably going to have to get a tranquiliser gun to stop you from jumping around all over the place... :wacko: blink.gif
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post 9th January 2005, 11:50pm
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Why are u posting when u shud be working!! (crackwhip placeholder smilie)

Ps.....is it ready yet!?!


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post 10th February 2005, 8:23pm
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Bump de Bump de Bump de Bump.......... well you get the point......


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post 11th February 2005, 6:38pm
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*Uses tranquiliser gun from Jurassic Park on Shagpuss*

Thinking about it, maybe that was a bit too much tranquiliser for a human being.
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post 11th February 2005, 9:10pm
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Human being? You have just complimented me!!

Seriously Troll, how are things coming along? tongue.gif


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post 12th February 2005, 4:35pm
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A bit slower than I anticipated. I've worked out how human society would evolve in the generation after taking the lunar base. I've only managed to complete a couple of chapters though.

The political situation in the years after the Old Grey fleet arrives is going to be central to my story, and political gain is going to be the motive of the conspiracy. I'm finding this a bit difficult to write because I don't want it to look like a critism of any of the modern political situations.
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post 22nd February 2005, 9:18am
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I missed this when it was a new topic but I'd say good luck to you and I look forward to reading it! Unfortunately that may not happen for several decades but that's just me sad.gif


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post 26th February 2005, 12:46pm
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tongue.gif Veteran do u mean u reading or Troll writing? grin.gif


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post 22nd March 2005, 11:55pm
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I think the fact that it's been exactly a month since I was last logged in is a good indication tht I'm talking about me grin.gif


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post 23rd March 2005, 7:56pm
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Well if it helps, I'm pretty bogged down with other stuff at the moment.
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post 11th April 2005, 7:46pm
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And yet I find myself still waiting....... tongue.gif


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